I think it looks great. I never heard the song and you have have spoken like a true artist we very rarely think our work is great we always have something greater in mind. I love the lower part it just falls apart and the red and black dots look like bullet holes. It looks like this guy had a bad day.
Thank you for such a long comment, I appreciate it very much Thatīs true.. I always want to draw or paint something magnificent, what Iīve got on my mind, but it never turns to the picture I wish to create.
If youīre interested, hereīs the song, itīs quite catchy.. - [link]